Billy bullies Griffin with his friends to let out his anger. Billy then starts to regret everything he has done. He wants to be forgiven by Griffin. But Griffin doesn't believe him. Later , he forgives him. BIG MISTAKE.
It lacks thrilling moments and schemes which i like most... But the story is promising i just feel it lacks something more.... I just read it from early stage but lets read for more updates to know how the story develops
Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
