Bonnie's Touch

It's got good main characters, but I think it suffers too much from the intentional "evil world" design.What I mean is that everyone everywhere are just greedy monsters who strive for power and kill millions of others for shits and giggles.Also most if not all characters somewhat relevant to the story all build their power in some way by using randoms as food for their cultivation.This creates a problem in my opinion since the "MC faction" can't really have greedy power hungry mindless villains as friends, but instead needs to find "unique" people or simply mind-control subordinates.This in turn creates a problem where everyone is mindless and the story predictable except for when the main crew does something smart.Another problem I have is the use of ridiculously excessive numbers such as billions, trillions etc. They are numbers too big for a human mind to even understand the implications of. It's common to use in Xianxia for some reason, but I find it annoying to read as the implication of "billion" becomes a "trivial" thing to the story, making it seem not special whatsoever. Using 10 thousand instead would be a number one could picture in their head and still seem very impressive."Slaughtering a trillion people in an instant" > ...Uhh okay?"Slaughtering a city of 10 thousand people in just a few hours" > You pretty much see the bloodbath taking place.The story isn't bad though, and DPs writing quality is good, as it was in his other works.

My first time reading a novel like this. I enjoyed it a lot. Very detailed with character build up and the world its staged around. Gets you very engaged from the beginning. I find myself wondering what will the characters do next and how it will impact their situation.  Great read!?

this is good novel with good story. but cultivation rank (name) just to absurb, this is good novel with good story. but cultivation rank (name) just to absurb, this is good novel with good story. but cultivation rank (name) just to absurb, this is good novel with good story. but cultivation rank (name) just to absurb,

we'll all I can say is that... Its's Well Made Story. I love the characters, the Story Plot. So Author please pretty please—update this story please

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Finally at 04 September 2018. The Novel completed its first Volume. Thank you reader for the love, support, and feedback.Volume 2 is coming. It is more about his adventure while readers could see the country slightly better. He would start to visit other cities, the 'dungeon', and 'battle' difficult children of Gods. Meeting new friends and foes along the way. He would also grow, but only slightly. Gwahahaha.