BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.

This is an Action Packed Novel that will spiced your Reading Time with a set of interesting ingredients. Good Characters. Fresh World Building. Smooth and Explosive Plot. I recommend this novel to all Readers out there.

I rate this story 5/5 it has a great plot and has pretty good character development in the early stages which is good and I like how the story line is unique a little in its main purpose. The updates are late but I found out why so I won't be deducting any points from the score. Other then that I can't wait for future chapters and I wish the author luck for this story.

looking forward to this.                                                                                                            looking forward to this

in my opinion the big paragraphs are one of the reasons  it is annoying to read. they should have wrote smaller so it would pick interest of reader more easily

Ok I will start with the fact that the concept of the story is kinda interesting. Basically mc becomes a god over a 2d univercancerse of his own creation. Sounds cool, right? Well the problem with this novel is the author has no understanding of science or human biology yet precedes to talk about things like how if everything stopped moving then time would stop or the stupid idea that yoga and eating well will help his cancer. He seems to think controlling the various glands in his body will cure his cancer and wants to make himself taller by making more growth hormone, which wouldn't work at all but would instead give him a problem like enlarged feet or hands and the like. Growth hormones don't make you taller if you are full grown like damn.But of course the journey doesn't end here, beside the authors atrocious understanding of basic science, he loves just summarizing chapters. What do I mean by that? Well I mean a chapter will read like a summary. Little to no detail at all. In the span of a single paragraph he can pick a girl up, have sex, and be home in as little as 4 sentences. Honestly it was the concept of the mc being in control of a new world that got me reading this but this is at best a 2 star novel. The mc is more 2d then the world he controls.The author just ****ting on basic science is what destroys this fucking novel, it would have been a thousand times better if the author came up with a magic reason for his cancer being defeated and why he gets taller and **** instead of trying to use his incredibly limited understanding of the human body to write how the mc plans to make himself better.Read if you have nothing better to do or read. Literally a newspaper is better than this.

Nakama world is pretty cool, Colin essentially blows up the word and is betrayed by his sister. Nice. But what I found the best was Adventura was quite Kingdom Buildy and travels through history I also like how the NPCs in Adventura responds.... slightly confused about Shiro as a human and Colin now wolfcat, but hey! you can never have to many wolfcats!