My little brother never fails to disappoint. At the time of writing there ste only 24 chapters, however these 24 chapters already have me ready for the next 500. The main characters name, lucas, is also my name so i feel a litte more invested i this story thatn i would in others.
Started out good had high hopes, but yeah kind of turned to shit. a problem many chinese suffer from the semi racist shit and talking about women and their character traits like its the middle ages over generalises how all women are all the time a problem a lot of chinese novel suffer from but it's exremely bad here. Kind of wonder if the author has even meet a women before. i get it he wants a to write a harem wich are usually shit but this is just extremely bad even for a harem.
I really like the starting of the novel and the plot. I also like the pace of the novel with the slows and fasts. It is really a great one buddy! Fighting and will be waiting for the updates. Last but not least, really admire about being able to write systems and stuffs as I am really bad with it and calculations. Haha. Anyway, good luck for the contest too!
