Becoming a Mage In a New World
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Gavin, a window cleaner with a love for all media involving magic and the supernatural in general, dies and is reincarnated in a world that he could only call a dream-come-true. Determined to not let himself fall into mediocrity a second time, he lets a newly formed ambition take hold of him, for better or worse.

A/N: This is my first time trying to write anything and I intend to use this story as more practice than anything serious. I'm just making the plot up as I go so don't expect anything revolutionary.

I only have a general direction I want to take things, so suggestions are welcome. At the time I'm writing this I have the first five chapters done. I personally think they aren't all that great, and are a bit chaotic, but I hope I'm just being overly-critical. When I wrote them, I was trying a bit of everything to get a feel for where I wanted to take things, but I think it should improve quickly.

Please leave a comment and/or review letting me know what I did well/poorly and what I can do to improve, it would be appreciated.

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the story concept is good, game talent in martial art world. ealier chapter has a nice progress, the plot is not too fast and also not too slow. but in the 10+ chapters the author lost his brain juice and wasted 10 chapters more with fillers that can be deleted without disturbing the plot and then the story become unworthy to read anymore. so dont wasted ur coins or tickers to read it. i drop this one for now... i hope author rewrite the story with less fillers and less wasted chapters.
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I need spirit stone ? why the free chapters soo slow i’m hating it now that i need to unlock chapters with stones it’s very annoying ? ...........
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F*%king retarded qidian always locking damn booksKeep up the jobs lose more readers it’s what you do and you wonder why people hate you allYou wonder why other translator sites don’t even like the mention of ur nameMoney grubbing idiots
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This does not have a soul; it’s empty.It feel like I can’t immerse myself in it.Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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A Chinese version of the Japanese light novel, where a high school student goes to a magical isekai world with a smarthphone?...........................
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