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is there going to be a story on Matteo? you really write very well i would love to read more of mattteo

Read this story on wattpad and I liked it. Although it had a different title there, still a good story. A slow but interesting start and could build to something great.

So the world is heading for an apocalypse in 3 yrs and everyone on earth has the option to enter another world and get stronger.  It's not a new concept, but that doesn't really matter.  The story itself is alright, if you are into gamer stories with lots of screens and numbers,  Good writing quality and update schedule too.  The main problems of this story is the way it is currently structured.  There isn't really an engaging plot.  Like the main goal is just to get stronger, and going into different dungeons or opportunities to get stronger.  That's it.  There's no overarching plot in the Otherworld.  It's just to kill monsters, earn money and level up, and repeat.  He isn't solving problems that help people of the other world or anything.  He just appears to be amassing strength the entire time.  Also feels like the author sometimes falls into that pitfall, where the MC is the only one with good ideas and carries everyone else.  Story has a lot of potential, but the author needs to work harder to make them happen.

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The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.

The story was riveting except for the inconsistencies in the translation. Names were changing, different from the beginning of the story than to the last. There are also several gender errors and grammatical errors. Despite these mechanical errors, the story flowed seamlessly and the character build up was interesting. Good read but overly priced.