I read this one a while ago, but never bothered to post.
The MC is far from being intelligent and the ways the author tries to imply that he is is baffling. OH MY GOD! He told the skellies to dodge instead of blocking! GENIUS!
The game itself is generic, and the things that are not generic about it, you can immediately tell how hard the author was trying to come up with something new, unsuccessfully in my opinion.
The items are completely boring and generic, even more so than items from real life MMOs, which is probably some sort of achievement in lack of creativity.
The characters are for the most part generic, dull, and one-dimensional.
It also falls on the same pitfall of every other VRMMORPG novel I've read so far, which is the author having no idea whatsoever of how streaming and content creation works. I say this even in the context of "It's the author's world", because it's very nonsensical.
Sadly, it's still average to above average when it comes to VRMMORPG novels.
