ANG SECRET MUSE NG BARANGAY SAMPAGUITA

the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny

A good and interesting novel held back by pointless scenes and sudden drops in MC's IQ. The story is great and it's fun to see the 2 MCs change the world and get rich. Sadly, they don't always seem as intelligent as they should be considering their background in the real world. Writing quality is fine, though you might get irked by sudden mixing of 1st person and 3rd person in a few para. Good luck to the author.

The picture is cute...The picture is cute...The picture is cute..The picture is cute..The picture is cute.... IDK anything , i just knowThe picture is cute

The first 40 chapters are not bad. There is a lot to be wanted for sure, but they are readable. Once you get past chapter 40 that all goes away. As others have said, the translation is horrible and it looks like the story starts to fall apart. I can't tell you what to do, but if you want to waste 2 FP per chapter like I did, go ahead. I am putting this out there so others don't make that mistake out of curiosity.

Read til ch 20- absolutely love it- I was impressed with how the family was written and their reactions.                                    

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