A smile that hides the knife

The reviews make this seem great but all the 5 stars are bs.  I’m barely on chapter 4 and there are already hella problems. 1 problem is that Jack disrespects the KING AND WALKS OUT OF THE CASTLE AFTER “convincing” A GUARD?  Even if this is a fantasy, that’s already BS.  And on chapter 4, Jack doesn’t want people to know he’s a hero but when the branch leader yells out”. Hey Brat!  Are you the hero?”  Jack yells out “yeah, what of it?”  This sh*t already made me lose so many brain cells and it’s only the 4th chapter

I’m literally on chapter 5 and I’m hooked. The best thing about this story isn’t even the characters or the world building, it’s the community including the author. Just reading the comments as I go has me dying laughing.

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This is very Interesting and new concept. I will like to see how it going to evolve in time. We need to see the chapter 2.Nice work, Mate....

I think this might give us our best shot!" Naruto said without any hesitation... he had great confidence in his plan

"Kubilang pergi!"