TLDR: Needs work but it is still better than most novels on WN. Don't pass it up!This review will be written in three parts, first is an analysis of the story, second will be on the writing style, and third will be the conclusion.Story:Aside from some cliches, and a generic fantasy world, the story is quite enjoyable. Cliches are cliches because people like them, right?I will completely look over the fact the author turned the MC into a 12-year-old boy, though, because it will provide the MC with four years to grow their pool of MP.The MC used Fireball and Inspect, but when creating a "bo