Initially, the approach and progression of ML and FL were enjoyable, with entertaining moments like the Iruna rescue mission, ML's ideal haunted fortress quest, and the trip to gather information. These early episodes created a delightful impression. However, as the story progressed, particularly after the [spoiler alert: King's rescue or the fake prince plot], there wasn't much substantial development. The protagonist's language became increasingly irritating.
Even though Lefi and ML tied the knot, their marriage lacked a memorable impact, reducing to a clichéd alpha male rivalry. Despite the fantastical setting with various magical creatures like wolves, snakes, spirits, vampires, elves, succubi, dragons, and demons, the story failed to delve deeper into these elements.
ML quickly rose to become one of the world's strongest, yet his stats remained significantly lower than Lefi's. The lack of explanation for why others couldn't compete with her left readers hanging. Moreover, the main character's transformation from an initially eccentric otaku to a goody-two-shoes hero was jarring, along with unnecessary loli themes and underdeveloped characters in later chapters.
Overall, the novel felt dull and dragged on, which could be partly due to my direct jump from the manga, where the storytelling and dialogue were more appealing. The manga receives a rating of 4 out of 5, while the novel struggles with its dialogue and pacing. If one can overlook the occasional niche conversations and slow parts, the novel might earn a similar score.