Zodiac War

Naturally as the story progress the FL leaves the ML over something not within his control. This book went from really good to trash really quickly. Spiced this trash up in a way that the story is now unreadable. Will not be coming back to read this.

I followed you from your vampire book. Interested to see where you’ll take this book

Even though the story seems interesting, the grammar my boy.. Is just horrible. I tried multiple times but i couldn't move past it. Before dropping 500+ chapters you could have edited your first chapters. Bs.

So much wasted potential good idea but bad implementation , you should rewrite it and tone down on revenge driven characters they are a lazy way to express the drive to overcome.

So far this novel has a great start, the system is definitely interesting and a fresh take on such things and the MC is a pretty decent guy and being an artist is a definitely change from the usual MC.  If it keeps or exceeds this quality in the future I definitely give it top ratings for being worth reading start to finish.

The read can be a little slow in the beginning, but things picks up later. He clearly accepts and adapts to the world to become a real barbarian. He's straight forward like the other barbarians but still be vigilant against others he deemed suspicious; thinking more for himself but gets misunderstood as love for his people.I've read a little ahead, he definitely embraces the barbarian's style of strength, power, and dominance... against his enemies and women; he went Khal Drogo with one of his concubine (who isn't a princess).Overall....approve.