What really happened

I like the story...  It was interesting to the point that I'm looking forward to it...  I was wondering who will be the man who will catch her attention and will find her interesting....

There's nothing special about this novel, pretty seen this story lines in a lot of novels before. I don't know writers no longer term to build up new storylines.

Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.

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Nice concept good worldbuilding and a real character instead of the factory made mcs we getting

i haven't read the story, but you had me at cats. im giving full stars because i had the almost the exact same idea a year ago minus the elemental cats. i get to be lazy now and not write the story and read someone elses stuff.