The speed at which the character develops is good enough, it's fast but not fast-fast. I felt 'patriotism' but not a lot like some other works out there that I've read.Also, the writing wasn't clean. There are clearly some aspects where the MC got this with this effect but then it was forgotten or even changed, maybe the author forgot about them and was too lazy to check? It's not a big deal though. Another thing is that, stop being too comprehensive about the dropped loots, you can do better and I strongly believe that. The dropped loots take a lot more work counts that the story sometimes where I just skip them cause they are repetitive anyway. You can just highlight/mention some of the most unique gains he'll get so that you can fit more details in one chapter.And just a suggestion, why not make talents with similar effects fuse? Enhancing similar traits between talents and keeping other effects and optimizing them according to the base talents will work out well in my opinion in this kind of setting.Anyway, I enjoy reading this.
