MC's extreme distrust is getting on my nerves so much I want to kill him, he's putting off everything even strength just because he doesn't trust system. bro you will die first before the system does anything to you if you keep on being so dumb. Secondly, interactions with characters arent really logical, it seems quite forced. they don't really think into things. Harold is too cowardly for the first half, but good thing he still tried to save his wife. Thirdly, too much fights and all of them are very long, I'm now around 30 chapters and the whole thing is just fighting and nothing else, even adventure is very short and plain, no relaxation at all, it's as if I'm watching a 10 hours long Naruto fights compilation. we can't be so tense the whole few hundred chapters, that's not novel, that's torture.Fourthly, MC is too bloodthirsty and doesn't think about using terrains to fight, he also attacks someone that he knows could kill him without even talking it out, just say that you want to end things peacefully, u haven't even killed anyone from each side yet.Fifthly, some forced plots are too obvious, should think of lengthening the plot and adding more points instead of directly going into it and forcing everything.sixth, this is just my preference. it's fine if you want to add mystery and all that, but at least let us know basic things gradually and not just put fights without going into mysteries.
