Two Students Adventures In Arixar
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Hi Hi, Miko of Kumaism is back again, Kuma!

This fiction is a revised version end of my first fiction Two Students in the New World, Kuma! Here is the synopsis:

Leah is a mute girl.

Matt is an unsociable boy.

During their seventh grade year, they meet for the first time and a year later, they become friends.

While going to the movies together, Leah sees a little boy about to be hit by truck and rushes to push him away. Matt follows Leah in time to reach her before she was hit. However, he didn't make it in time to push her away from the truck and they both lose their lives.

Dying at fifteen years old, the God of Earth fishes out their soul before they disappeared from the world. The God wants to send them to the world of Arixar, a fantasy world with many similar features to RPG games.

But wait! The Earth God is actually a she and furthermore one of their former classmate?

Read as the two finds meaning of their life, go on adventures that will become their legend and most importantly, have fun in the new world filled with mythical creatures, gods, swords, and magic!

It's nice to meet you all, and welcome back to my dear readers who came to read this fiction again even though there has been a lot of changes, Kuma!

I would appreciate suggestions for this fiction, leave a comment behind or PM me anytime, Kuma!

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I wanted to like this one sooo much but it really revs up full throttle on the Chinese superiority. I don't even mind a little tuting of the Chinese horn I'm proud of my country to for the most part but it's super cringe when most of the story revolves around it.
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The reviews all looked good but the story just seems like super generic face slapping situations and a protagonist that walks around like he is god amongst men. Might end up better later, but for now seems cliche and generic
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Ok so I like the story and I love the comedy, one thing that does need a bit of toning down is the relation to reality it kinda breaks the emersion I mean it's been 1k years since our age tland they remember too much from that era.
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Bad spelling, cringy and the system does everything the mc asks without restrictions or requirements. MC is like a kid...........,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,..................
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For the first few chapters, I was uncertain if I would like the story. I was afraid 'cause there were so many ways it could turn out bad... the pucker factor was pretty high... luckily the storyline smoothly avoided the pitfalls other authors seem to routinely fall into and I actually fell in love with all the characters... it's now one of my favorite comedies
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Professor Kal is a story about Kal, a lich who hid his phylactery in another plane, granting him pseudo-immortality and a lot of power. He decides to explore the world since he hasn't left his cave for over two millennia. Mildly interesting story, however the execution left much to be desired.Writing quality is below average, there's a lot of awkward writing, small mistakes, and some of the dialogue is very cringy and unrealistic. (3/5 stars)Story development is quite bad. It's a typical overpowered protagonist story, where the main character is a teacher. The concept is somewhat decent, but the execution was quite poor. There are constant POV shifts to people I don't really care about. We have fights with said irrelevant people that makes the whole thing even more boring, especially when the main character is basically God. While a lot of stories have annoying POV shifts that completely ruin the flow, and makes me skip a lot of chapters, this novel is especially bad. Instead of separating the POV shifts and making them small, the author will release them in batches, so there's 2 - 5 chapters straight of different POVs. I find myself skipping several chapters at a time. (2/5 stars)Character design is meh. While the main character is comedic, and the dialogue is rather interesting, everything is bland. Every single one of these characters have very bland and cliché motivations. It is very hard to get invested into any of these characters. It feels like you are watching a play when you've already memorized the script. (2/5 stars)World background. It's rather bad to be honest. Theres very little information about spells and alchemy, aside from "use mana to make spell" or "combine ingredients until you get a cool colored potion
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