While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something. While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
rather new approach for a cultivation novel with a good pace.it is different from cultivation novels, where MC gets to the level of sect master in the span of 1 or 2 years with the help of plot armor.
Superb! One of the best books I have read so far. The author is simply incredible. The writing is one of the best I have read. You really have an amazing writing style that leaves the reader engaged and wanting more. The characters are lovable and simply amazing to follow as the story unfolds. The plot is so good and I honestly want to follow it to its climax. This is by far a 10/10 in everything I have talked about and I recommend it to everyone one who wants to read stories with the best quality. Great work to the author.
Good plot. The suspenseful reveal of the characters was very engaging. I wish to read more, hence I am very excited. More power to the author. Greater inspiration!
