I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is goingI liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the storyI really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
Another one of those xianxia mindset author trying to blend futuristic science (game) and cultivation. And failed.Note to author:If you want fantasy, stay fantasy, don't try to explain things scientifically, or using random knowledge, you'll end up with half assed logic full of plot holes. Science isn't your strong point it seems, so don't try too hard on it.And do try to make notes of everything you wrote in past chapters, don't suddenly change things up to fit the next plot and expect readers won't notice.
I'm a lover of Korean rofan novels and manhwa. This book caught my attention because of the villainess trope ?The story flows well from the start. The author wastes no time introducing us with the characters and hooking us with the plots.The story has just started so I don't have much to say. I love FL can rebuild her reputation because of the ogSelena.The brother's and the maids' reactions are a given due to how badly the ogSelena acted before. I'm all in for 'reforming the villainess' stories.One more time, the author's writing is well for non-native English. I believe readers will enjoy both her writing and the storyline she weaves for this story.All the best!
