Their Greatest Retaliation

I absolutely  loved this book. it was well written, and I was hooked from the start. Well done, Author!

I have followed this story ever since because I want to see everyone who made Tonia's life miserable pay. Please make them pay Presh ... for me.   A great read.

I really tried to get into this story. But it is so odd. Suppose to be a game world but it feels more like forced government recuirtment experimentation with possibly population control. The A.I. forces the MC into a female body with a female name even tho its suppose to be illegal for gender-bending by government law. The MC says he wants to be masculine but makes no effort to do so. Suppose to be a mech novel but all ive seen so far is mutation and really stupid plot armor.

please don't drop the story it's very good and I like it ??????????????????????????????????????????

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your novel is pretty good, it has a good start and a good character design, the only problem is that there is less details for the world background and story development. but overall its good! thats all!