The endless night

Not worth reading

skip the first ~45 chapters. if you've read the legendary mechanic + any vr gaming novel you'll pretty much know all the explained concepts and the storie really kicks off with the beast tide in chapter 45 so you should be fine. the pacing in the beginning is pretty bad since the author explains everything for complete genre newbies which is fine but boring for vets. aside from that i think this story could become very good it's currently to early to say (chapter 100) since the players haven't yet arrived nor have we explored the universe but i have some faith in the author he has demonstrated some skill in previous works so we should be fine. mc likes hiding his powerlevels so be ware of that although this too seems to become less egregious as we get deeper into the story. don't let this review stop you from reading the story but i had to take of some stars for the rough start. The English is excellent.

I got tired to the obsession on price of everything, even risking of being called racist I would like to known is it a asian thing or just something else entirely. I mean it’s quite evident in many other novels not just this one but it’s very highlighted in this novel. interesting idea though but not really my thing

Hello, I did that author noshame thing,I give 5 stars because I love my own story, and I hype with my own story. Here is what you will get from this story: -Character development-Kids MC that strong and smart-Romance-Medieval era setting-Quite complicated power system-Action with sword and magic-Moral ValueAnd here is what you SHOULD NOT expect from this story-Good grammar (For people who are very biased with grammar, you can skip it, this is my first novel, and English is not my first language. You can judge my English just by reading this review, I merely bad at punctuation and poor choice of words. Cnc is welcome, I want to improve, and I will)-Harem (Maybe multiple girl will have love interests toward MC, but this is NOT harem)-Lemon (this story is 18+ because of its violence and gore)

Let me just say, the synopsis was really good ? I like the start of the first chapter, but it kind of gets confusing with the name changes.

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