The Werewolf's Superiority

This is such a great read!!! Other than some vocabulary check needed, this book will keep definitely keep your toes curled! I can't wait to read more. Please continue this story, and don't be like other writers who don't finish what they started. Thank you, author.

It has been a few weeks since I liked a story premise well enough to write a review. This book has pretty good grammar and the sentences read well. It never messes up the genders. But the X and repeating same X where they need a different synonym or deleting the 'and X' is still a problem. Skill/Spell names have horrible inconsistency. Most of my 2 Star deduction is due to this. Also, a few too many tropes like 'pouring the whole bottle of pills' are here. This particular trope bugs me a lot. Respect the Pills!

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Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)