The Waitress

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Finally a video game novel that it’s not the same old MC travels back in time and becomes a pro because he starts stealing everything with knowledge of the future.No, no, this novel is actually great with an actual skilled MCThanks author

Thankful that I've seen this novel.                         Nice one. ??????????Love it ???                               ??☺️?☺️??????☺️????????☺️☺️☺️☺️??????????☺️☺️???☺️☺️????☺️☺️??☺️☺️????☺️????☺️????????????????????????????????????????

Easily 5 Stars The World Is New And Original And The Character Development Is Superb I Like The POV Its Written In And The System.(Im Bad At Writing Reviews)

This is a return gift from this junior to the senior. I haven't gotten enough time to read this precious work of yours yet, but I have been enlightened by your previous novel "The lustful young master is sinister".By the way, I really liked the synopsis. It's really thought out thoroughly.

Okay here comes the great review of self proclaimed Master Blaster Plaster Trasher... Ugh... I guess I got a little self burn... Ahem Anyway here comes review after I read first five chapters.Pros Of Novel:1- The detailing of characters are great. Emma Fisher already became my Waifu and Alex and Ravi are best male characters. Lucy is still vaguely discribe but not every character can be discribed in just 5 chaps.2- The plot is intriguing. All these things like it's futurestic yet there ain't much need to describe atmosphere is what makes reading iy convenient.3- Till now, none of the chapter is anything boring. They piqued interest and were able to maintain that.(No even I can do that... I can't do anything though)Now onto the Cons:Well there ain't much maybe cuz it's beginning or maybe it's just that good but here are some suggestions.... Try to maintain world building. The surrounding the crowd and even tiny things like rooms and halls. Even though it looks like there ain't any need to do that now and story is interesting.  If you suddenly started world building all at once, it will become hard as well as boring. So If yoh start doing it now irrespective of whether it's needed or not with interesting stories still there, I think it would help you in long run.So Finally My 5 Start review cuz there ain't any flaws for now at leat.