The Village

Its really nice reading it and i hope all of its harem member remane loyal to him and also grow alongside as they become more powerfull. If possible every harem member get as much as possible screen time with mc and have romance. Also i would like mc to also grow stronger and not only his discipline........

I think there can be more to the characters and there personalities but this is still really fun and good to read it thanks for the hard work you but in to it

The book is interesting hooks it's readers with the plot, and flow of her words right from the beginning. It is a book worth giving a chance.

Ughhh another system novel. Ah shit here we go again. .....................................................................................................

Nice......nice......story.keep it up......

Wasted potential.Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5.Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5.In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work