The System's Soul

My first novel in this web, so far so good. I recommend this to anyone who like fantasy novel...........................................................

review:1. wiriting quality is good enough to read.2. story is developing in a right direction.3. mc is confident, he has brain and he uses it.4. female lead is cute (really she is)5. zero to no misunderstandings.6. side characters have their own story and problems so we can understand their character but author focuses more on mc's story which is fair enough for me.7. To be honest world has yet to be developed and till now it is good developement has lot of potential.JUST GIVE IT A TRY YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.

Honestly, I love the ingenuity and newness of your storyline. It’s like a fresh, fantasical take on very familiar issues and it makes it easier to relate with the characters. I like the pacing and your overall tone and delivery, but I think you need to work a bit on your grammar construction and punctuation. Asides from that, this is a truly promising story and I think you’re doing an amazing job!

thanks for the effort author-san ??? moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee

muito bom esse artigo . Bom trabalho e desenvolvimento

This novel is quite enjoyable, but unfortunately, it is no longer being updated???