The Other Hybrid

another best novel in webnovel that no longer updates.. webnovel don't  cared about novel those stopped how sadanother best novel in webnovel that no longer updates.. webnovel don't  cared about novel those stopped how sad

Decent read but to slow update time in comparison to length of chapters ( really short chaps).                                                                                                            

I'm really disappointed with this novel, my expectations is so high I'm angry with myself wasting my time and getting excited for nothing. I genuinely love the first 50 chapters I thought based on the title and synopsis regarding accepting disciples and making them strong. But until the latest chapters it's about this kingdom war. I know this is world plot but where is the teaching? its just like a passing in some chapters he just gave some mantra and be done with it.The conversation between the master and disciples feels like robot there's no emotion!  Im just ranting because I waste my precious time to be this severely disappointed. Just ignore this angry reader. ?

The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.

Una buena historia que me deja deseando por mas con cada capitulo. Me gusta mucho las razones por las que los hombre son inferiores a las mujeres pues siento que tiene mucho sentido el porque son raros, asi como las razones del protagonista el cual aunque no le desagraden las mujeres es muy bueno que no se pierda en lo momentaneo y siga su busqueda para liberarse de las ataduras que le quitan toda la libertad de dar rienda suelta a sus deseos.

The story idea is just awesome, I was in love with it the moment I read the synopsis. I hope the author continues the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!