The Merge

First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.

One of the few cultivation novels that actually make a difference.Qin Yun is no cripple, who is rejected by his family, just to rise to sudden power to beat everyone to a bloody pulp.He is also no child, which acts wise beyond his years (Chapter 1 - Age 21).There are no stale cultivation "numbers" (realm 3 stage 10!!) and demonic beasts are not just some sort of currency the MC can use to power up beyond normal means.The world is deserving of being called a Xianxia novel and the means of fighting are colorful - and don't need random manuals of increasingly high grades (mortal/earth/heaven).The MC is neither arrogant, nor cruel beyond common sense. He actually cares about his family and friends (or partner), even after 100+ chapters. They haven't become an afterthought just yet.If you need some wholesome story of cultivation, you should give it a try.

Title:My NINE Female Apprentices...Synopsis:All 13 ...... Bro logical mistakes in the title/synopsis already are you serious??.......

The world of idle online as well as the story does not follow any preset standards compared to other stories i have read so far the character development has been rather small in terms of backGround but that is wholly do to the length so far Im sure there will be more as time goes on. i am Also really enjoying the choices the author is having the main character decide as they go against the norm but aRe not blatently overpower. All in all a wonderful story keep up the hard work!

"What should we do?" Hestia asked as she looked at the massive dark clouds circling the mountain, releasing lightning everywhere.

"Pokoknya jangan berhubungan lagi sama dia! Kalau nggak, kamu akan kakak pulangin ke Indonesia!" ancam Fathan pada akhirnya.