The Merchant's System

Read till Ch 334 and i have to say im extremely dissapointed with the author. It was one of the best novels i have read so far,interesting with good plots with a little bit of slice of life, BUT... in the newer chapters the author stretching the chapters like theres no tommorow with so much repetitive details that it becomes impossible to read with no story progression,it becomes a chore much less enjoyable. For example.. The protagonist tries to do something and had a thought....proceed to write 3 chapter explaining his thought with useless descriptions wHICH are so repetitive and boring. It could have been one of the best novel i would recommend to friends but i have to drop it now.

This is a good read. I'm a new author as well but I've only started writing a few chapters. I read your story to see if there were things I could improve on but I immediately got hooked on the first few chapters.

I’m caught up with the Translations. It had a decent start at first. But it quickly becomes more and more disappointing. Clearly this story is not well thought. There is Tragedy after tragedy. I have no idea what the freak going on!Also Heroine said she did not want a extra person in their relationship. Yet then she says she can’t imagine how many concubines he’ll have in the future and pinches him. All of this was done in one chapter.It’s just really forced man. Even the System been utterly useless and I don’t see this being a long-run novel.

It seems pretty good so far! It is the Indian version of I'm Really A SuperStar! The culture is a little different but the humor is pretty good! Thank you for your hard work and can't wait for the rest!

thou the plot is inspired from japanese light novels and Mangas it's still quite good but still it's ruined by nationalism and feels like is written by a kid sigh hope the next one would be a better version of this since it will surely have a few versions by different authors

Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.