Here's the passage rephrased in a more human tone while retaining the
label:
"There's an instant connection. He's completely captivated by her, willing to go above and beyond to make her his. He's even willing to push past boundaries that should never be crossed, all in the name of love at first sight."
I'm happy the book was actually finished, Vicky and Nic got their happy ending. But there are some unanswered questions. What's up with Sonny?
But again, happy the author came back and finished it.
