The Final Elite

So far so good, the story is decent and the characters are well thought out. I am looking forward to more chaps. The only thing I think could be done better is phrasing and a few spelling errors could be fixed. And maybe the best part but no system is in it...yet let's hope it stays that way!

Just another repetitive face slapping novel where the mc gets 60 million dollars in one chapter and a sportscar for breathing. It then is just on repeat of faceslapping 101

was good but imojis were uhhh ,am gone !!Maybe next time when there are no imojis ,but it is good nonetheless ,highly recommend this hehehe

F uuck... How long are you going to make us wait for the next chapter? I have read this for 2weeks now beginning to last over and over. I just want to say, Nice piece of work.. X1000 to the 1000 power.

Looking down into the clear blue waters below, a young girl around the age of 18 greeted her. Her skin was an unnatural pale with a dash of pink. She had a small button nose with soulful blue eyes that seemed to see through a person's soul. Her hair was long, reaching all the way down her back and to her knees. Its color slightly mystified her as much as her appearance.

We arrived 'home' it was a beautiful house I say. When we entered the house I saw large boxes and crates and a seemingly empty room. "Home sweet home, we were just finishing decorating and just moved the rest of the items. If you go up the first door on the second floor you'll find your room.