this novel clearly has potential! the writing style, the characters, the world building, the pacing, especially the plot. it's all executed very nicely! i see a top author in the making. keep writing, dear author!(also luken can step on my face and i'd still thank him)
I'm really impressed by the setting of this book. First of all, I would like to give you a round over plus as the author of this book. Bravo for a job well done !. This is the first time that I would ever read a story with keen interest. ????. I am definitely adding it to my library.
So... I think this is my second review, but the story seems to be going great and even if it just another typical Urban Cultivator style novel (even though he is using magic) it is doing the trope justice.
"Defying, have you found a nice place?" Izan forced himself to push down his thoughts of the future battles and made himself think of the present. Izan honoured his words and his words shouldn't be taken lightly, therefore, Izan would do as he promised, to have a relaxed sightseeing with his wives. 'Heh, it's not something I would do, but I surely can't deny that it would be wonderful to relax and not think of the future for a single day...' Izan was amused by his own inner thoughts, Izan gave a chuckle before a geniune smile appeared on his face.
