Tale of MurkVeil

The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair

Garbage, i know we all use this word alot around here but my god i can't find any other word to describw this thing.The first 60-70 chapters were pretty fun to read and i though this would be the next system novel to pop off but then it was as if the author didn't want to write a system novel anymore and instead started a generic plot line about immortality, dude, i came to read a system novel, if i wanted to read a adventure novel i would just go re-read legend of the great sage.The mc is the plainest thing ever, no desires, no motivatoon, no real thoughts,  he just reacts to whatever happens in front of him,  the side-characters? what side-characters? completely forgettable.

It looks like I found the story that flows like brooks and not Yangze river or Yellow river. Centrally authors creativity doesn't flee like clouds and water,  story moves in repetitive way one hundred times slower then usual novels. It's to mysterious. Way to.

Okay, this novel is good.Why is that?Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk.Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest.This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL.Writing Quality:Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell

It's not an easy case. An imbalance between gameplay and character world. I like the gameplay. I don't like reading about events outside the system.

Keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................................................................