Sweeter than Fiction

A lot of revenge plots which escaltes from a minor matter to something irreconcilable which can get boring. When they mention going to a restaurant..U know shits about to go down.

The author gathered elements of lovecraft's work which honestly was very well written, were it not for the propaganda of Chinese morality that grows like cancer throughout the book. There are three tenses in the narrative: The near past, the imperial past, and the future. The fusion of the three is not articulated. It is common for the author to praise a morality only to end it in the next paragraph preaching the opposite.

3 stars, the plot is fine and all and it started well but as soon as the first reincarnation ended it got worst, while the idea was still there the story focuses more on nerfing the mc. He can literally deduce anything he knows and from the first world is a large amount of knowledge. Anyway the only part that made me lose interest is the part where the mc stopped thinking. I’d understand if he wanted to get a challenge but in the second incarnation you would understand what i meant

After reading the story so far I'm whipped for the game. How much I want to play a game like that too! The plotline so far looks interesting and the way the author has merged the game into the story, absolutely hooked me to it.I'll be looking forward to more chapters. Good work, author!

IN A NUT: Pathetitic MC gets a SYSTEM when he falls into the depths of despair... And starts preparing for the coming DOOMSDAY !REVIEW: The summary which caught your attention , has never happened, yet! System requires RMB to work.. personally I wish if the MC was smarter! he buys blades and guns- but donno how ot use them!! he should've concentrated on personal strength, rather than external strength initially!! it is still an awesome novel! thanx for the chapters AND KEEP'EM COMING!!

Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3)Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3)Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3)Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3)Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.