First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP “I cultivate everything” setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently) To the author let me say good story, keep writing and I’ll keep reading.
