Skeptic Loyalties

Please more chapters

*This just my initial review*okay Mr. Author..the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good..but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter.conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read.example of conversations..MC: "Hello there"*Explanations of something useless or irrelevant*Girl: "hey, how're you"*inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations*that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro..if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less..this is just my opinions.because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same.i dont know, thanks.

I hope you can include Awakening story..reincarnation in another body million of time..have a lot of knowledge and friends around the world..it is among best story i've ever read and were my first novel..thank you..i will support you guys and keep cheering for you..all the best ok..

A great book probably not going to be selected though. I would really appreciate it if someone can send me link to the MTL or raws. Thank you and God bless.

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i swear this novel is so good and funny af ?❤️