Short Stories - Boy Meets Girl in 3 Minutes

Although I have seen like 10 books similar to this, this is also a different ability for the same concept. Do you even understand all that mumbo jumbo talk btw.Basically I said still the same color but a different shade

traps what more to say traps and Loli nice .                         but shota is also good

Actually a very good read it has the standard cliches but it puts a twist on it by having an MC that warps expectations. Unlike other stories with a Ancient being reincarnated into a mortal this MC doesn't loose his attitude of a sovereign and makes for some funny af interactions. I had some serious Battle Frenzy ptsd moments at first but as the story carried on it really set itself apart. Yeah there is still the filler tropes that are setups for face smacking but its hilarious.The main female lead is fucking adorable and has so much character you can't say her personality is lacking hell she brings the MC up and that's hard to do as a side character

Gave it a 5 since many people are giving 1 star either for reasons that don't fully represent the story or just no reason at all. This novel is an okay read and it does have a high probability that it would be a good story as the chapter goes on.MC also isn't that bad compared to other novels.

The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, ?  I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️  in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️

Story so far seem somewhat generic, but there is a few unique takes here and there.English is good, updates are a bit slow, but writing is difficult so can't complain much.The main character is fairly fleshed outPersonally I like a bit more detail in my story eg. Base descriptions, what's in the crates he stole etc.The world background is very Interesting, but I don't feel like it's explored that much so far. But keep at it bud