Rising Moon, Floating Star (ATG)

This story is Awesome. It could easily become a top 10 original novel on this site in my mind. The only issue keeping this story back from being one of the best? Grammar. The Author appears to be using Machine Translations to translate this story leaving it full of terrible Grammar. At least the spelling is on point. If the author had an English speaking Editor go through this it will rapidly rise in the rankings. But as is? This story will turn newcomers off really REALLY fast. The grammar is just that horrendous. people even defend the author talking about how he/she has no obligation to better his grammar. Then he paywalls it?

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The cover art is a photoshop of The Way of the Devil, I kek-ed. Scratch that it looks like it was done with paint. Honestly an interesting concept but the pacing and character development is totally missing. The translation is good though, the book itself is not.

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The first novel i read without old grandpa , reincarnation , system , op cultivation technique , op weapon , tournament ,  spacial ring/ bag , sect ,  harem hoarding mc , no bull**** infinite years secluded meditation , clone/avatarThis novel is really great it gives me fresh exp with right amount of comedy ,seriousness , drama and a very fitting iron lady to be the main female leadPlus the most important factor isI LOVE YOU LOULAN!!!!!!!!!!!

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?