Rising Dragon

Writing quality - 3 starsNo obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary (also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying) Update stability - 3 starsI'm neutralStory development - 3 starsThe pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)Character design - 2 starsCharacters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)World background - 2 starRarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity (there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting) It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obviousGood to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...

good book, I want it to carry on so please vote for it, for some reason all the bad main stream books get picked. it seems like such a bad choice. why not choose good books instead of bad ones sad was

The story is good and the steal function is great. Hopefully he won't turn into a degenerate and start stealing pan***s like a certain character. At some points the story extension seemed unnecessary; just to reach a certain word limit. It could be more concise and still be good in those parts.

I like this story a lot and hopes it will be interesting in the future as well and be of more chapters

"What, are you saying you want me to run around dressed in that?"

"Thank you" I breathed in and out and took it running back to the school.