Revenge

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Very interesting book. It is very interesting and deep. Liked the way the author stitched the story together with a lot of interesting and magical stuff. This is one of my favorite book so far. Good luck author

Not my cup of tea personally because of the sexism in this story. Such as “Don’t waste your words like women, be a man” “Even a man most likely couldn’t do it, but she’s a delicate girl.” Roughly, im not gonna go back to the story and specifically go back and read through just to find those remarks but that’s roughly what it said.

back to the past for someone at the peak of true gaming so he can restart as a gamer instead ;) a main character with flaws that other novels don't dare dofat, mismatched voice, not the peak of the main game of the story,no true external reasons to return, and an incredible sense of time(is a flaw)

Awesome action scenes, great dialogue. Absolutely hilarious story. I loved reading this, it is fast paced, and action packed. I enjoyed the author's use of humor, and was surprised by how detailed the scenes were.I full heartedly reccomend reading this if you like fantasy/action or dark humor. (For some reason my phone wanted to change humor to humour everytime I tried to type it up... ? Just another reason no one should use spellcheck for the final edit ?)

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