the story started off very good but at some point the author started to deviate in many points before concluding them. it's interesting to add a plot so that it's not all easy and follow a straight line of development, however adding too many detours can get a little tiring.I also think that at times it is not necessary to have such a long description of some things at that moment, you can approach them little by little in a natural way and fluid so that it doesn't become a dictionary.even so, I thank you for the book, I write this review so that in future moments you can have an inspiration or something as you follow the course of the book. I don't want to discourage you, offend you or anything like that, I just wanted to give you constructive criticism and my personal opinion on some points. hope you keep taking this novel forward. good job, author. ?