The story is structure and Quality wise absolutely up there. Even if a few more position marker for scene changes would be nice. The bad rating has therefore only one major reason and that is the lack of the correct Tags for the story or a mention in the Description. I don't know at what point the story is to be comedy or Romance. All I found was, Tragedy, Heartbreak. As Beta Simp of an MC, depiction of Torture or Abuse. At no point do the Tags mirror this, i normally stay away from those story's because I don't like this over dramatic plot. So is the story bad? No for a Dark - Romance type of story it would be ok, but it not what I was locking for and not what I wanted