"Alpha Ryker Dante from the Crescent Moon Park has decisively rejected you, dear Melanie, as his potential mate and Luna for our park. Your presence is henceforth forbidden unless you wish for it to end in embarrassment. These harsh words devastate you."
Your initial rejection by your supposed soulmate dealt a crushing blow. Throughout your life, you've faced constant rejection and judgment, but this latest rejection feels like a dagger through your fragile, broken heart. Despite the pain, you force a smile through your tears and turn to face the situation.
If that's how he chooses, you're willing to accept it. You glance over at your father, whose expression is a mix of fury and disbelief. The guests, staring in shock, question whether he could have fathered such a weak and unattractive werewolf. But even a human holds more power than you, they think.
Everyone around you, including your brother, seems unaffected by your plight. Your step-sisters show no concern. Frustrated and hurt, you speak up.
"Very well. I understand. Nobody wants me here. I'll leave, and you won't have to bear my presence again, especially not this flawed version of myself." Determined, you wipe away your tears and begin walking away, the sound of your sandals echoing in the cold.
Life seems cruelly unfair to you, leaving you feeling discarded and alone.
I think this has a lot of potential, but there are too many grammatical issues that make it difficult to read in order for me to truly enjoy the book. I love the plot, execution just needs some work!