oh wow I want to follow this story so much more! you could go backward or forward with what you have written here: so many rich characters and complex story line. please consider writing more, following what happens to Holly and Eros and the others or even juniper! thanks for the good read
This is making me crazy how prolonged these chapters are and yet I can't stop reading, about people who should have common sense yet so oblivious to what's going on around them, this book makes me happy and sad at the same time