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I like the story's content. There are few grammatical mistakes, but ignoring those, it's going pretty good. The plot is interesting, character development is worth the wait. Hope for more updates, thanks Author-san.

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At first it was good, but the more I read it the more nonsense it has become. Imagine Donghuang Ziyou didn't even knew Lin Xuan capability, how could that even possible for no to know that when MC is doing a lot of deed wherever he goes. Ziyou must already knew it, even if there is chance saying she is busy, she does have a lot of subordinate who can inform her everything that was happening to them. This is the reason, I dicided to drop reading this novel, it's also annoying a lot of thing that doesn't even make sense.

Exciting story...with a lot of potential. I can't wait to read more chapters.

He turned to Loki's crew and said lightly.