Review at ch 69The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well writtenVery descriptive The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character designIt's more like a wish fullfilmemtThe main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other womenNothing specialThere is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotionalBasically it's not relatable All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMCOverall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs storyDon't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it@Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personalityThis would improve the quality of this work by a lot