Tl:dr B- edging into a B. Better then most but still rough around the edges.This is a solid twist on the standard reincarnation cultivation novel. The author's writing is getting better and just about everything from a narrative perspective works just fine.With that said there are some areas which need improvement. The characters and world building are not detailed enough to feel, well... real. The plot moves rather quickly and not enough time is spent to genuinely get to know the characters which are so pivotal to the story. I appreciate that the author isn't padding the word count but more fine details would make the characters stand out from the background.All in all it's a good first novel from this author so expect some rough edges. I recommend that you give this novel a shot and see what happens; it's better then 85% of the stuff out there.
this thing got picked? the editors must be high as a kite.not to mention this is basically a fanfic of the novel and not a translation. since it changes the settings and characters.
First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.
