Novel Ideas

Perfect book, waiting for book 2!

"Guys don't worry this won't be a cultivation novel" *Proceeds to make it a cultivation novel.* I really liked the first two volumes but when you turned it into a cultivation novel in the third volume it just became disappointing. I really wish you kept it to kingdom-building and inventing stuff...

Finally translation quality worthy of the original novel. Only, where the h*ll did the translator go? I will be very saddened if this is a permanent loss.

The theme is good.But the background of character is not developed.story is slow ,but interesting,the picturisation of battles are good.the updates are slow.Nice theme

I only have one thing to say and one thing only - from ch 6 to chapter 17 there was no plot development, there was 2 chapters wasted on the "enemy" inner monologue which consisted of - "I'm better, how dare this commoner argue with me, how dare he look at "my" women" and so on.a fight was supposed to happen on ch 6 and didn't happen as of now and it's ch 18...

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