The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality
