Naruto: Wood-Wood Fruit

Face slapping, harem, and not a single person with an iq above the double digits. I dont recommend if you want to keep your sanity.           

**Brutal Mode** EngagedStarting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story..Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend.Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai.Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters.Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?

I can say....the first chapter is really hilarious and amazing! The Mc is a cussing machine and swears a lot! ??? When he called at customer service to complain, I suddenly remember my previous job that a customer swears a lot like Fu Jie ??? My stomach hurts from laughing! ??? Love this novel ??????

Is very addicting once you get into it. After a while I thought it would be better for him to be wrath incarnate instead of rage since the author added in the sins. All in all very good. Just one question? Will there be a second novel and if so when will you begin work on it?

Let’s talk about the book. It’s a great book, good story, plot, and everything you could possibly want. So if you’re still reading this then why aren’t you reading the book.

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