My fellow comrades

The first few chapters were a slow burn, but as the story progressed, I couldn’t help but think of the characters as anything but real people. I was quickly entranced by the world and all that populated it... Cant wait for more!

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The good thing about reading MCs progress through the novel is you get to feel his earlier struggles. It's normal for readers to be frustrated about MCs weakness, but when he achieves the level where he deserves to be, I imagine it would be so much more rewarding. Waiting for that point for this MC. As for writting quality, the author's writing improve as he makes more chapter. Good job author.

First and foremost I most say I was recommended this novel by webnovel front page. When I’m making this review I have only read 23 chapters so take it with a grain of salt.  As of right know maybe the rating is like 3.4/5 will probably change.Summery of the idea of the story: Rich kid get transferred to the past before the world ends and uses his inheritance to buy in game currency in a “magical game” that uploads your soul/mind in the body of an noble in a so far generic fantasy  world. He pays to win. The author has a hade habit of naming things and not describing things like “snake fire canon” or “female daemon cannon” but like what are the supposed to mean or look like. Then he forgets to add canon later in the chapter so it’s “female daemon” and “snake fire” I’m I suppose to know what they are. The there are what he calls “shield breakers” like what are they. I googled and close thing is spear men with shield from darkest dugeon it’s like the author expects me to know things that he names with out describing them. That’s fine if it’s a fanfic but not a stand alone story.The story also feels eastern. This is not a bad thing and most novels feel eastern on webnovel. Characters feel a bit 2d but I’m not really a long way in to the story yet to know. The world so far is an generic fantasy world with flintlock tech.  The original world called “blue planet” don't know why it’s not earth but whatever.  Have not been explored more than he is rich and from an “hidden clan” and that it breaks to pieces and only hundred thousand that's in the beta test survives with the soul/mind uploaded to the body of a noble in the other world. They released a lot of chapter in a few days ether this in an translation or the story was already published som were else. So don’t know how updates will be after the release there entire stock.Rating 3/5 out of polished feathers. As said earlier have only read a bit more than 25 chapters so will probably do an update when I have read some more. And somebody let me know if you see this review of if it has been ghosted or taken down. Has happens before. Hope you all have wonderful day.

Marco... I feel your pain. Auth..man the story description the scenarios, the feel, the situations everything is infront of my eyes.  You really did a marvellous job. I really wonder how marco journey goes and his love Ayesha will change him for better. I just want Marco to find his peace. I literally want to bury his stepmother. I dont know why they all are like that?Auth your story has good potential. keep writing. All the very best??

Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better