My Sunday Delight (Hiatus)

Just to give everyone an idea as to how the story is paced. At the beginning of every chapter the date time and location is posted since the book is a daily log. Chapter 1 is 17 March 2321Chapter 1868 is17 April 2321Lol it’s kinda of a total drag. Premise is interesting but there’s just so much filler. I find myself skimming/skipping the vast majority of chapters especially if it’s fights without MC. There will be fights between side characters and MC’s subordinates where the whole chapter is just listing both peoples cards and their effects. Then MC’s subordinate wins and we never see there opponent again. Like, why was so much time spent on naming and describing every aspect of a persons card if they show up for 10 minutes in a battle then just die.

Very impressed with this book's start so far, loved how fitting you included the perspective writing that it flows well and rolls off the tongue.Maybe, I should ask you to become my teacher of proofreading, haha!Anyway, I can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on! Keep it up, ya legend!Loved the MC's friend, such a fun character with his exploitative tricks.

I like wifi... need wifi to survive... no wifi, where am I? What a scary world, without wifi. Unacceptable, this is abuse! Return my wifi to me!

Hello, this is author.Actually, this is not my first story on this web. I failed some and trying to get this story done. But I need your help to support this story from now, so I can get real to finish this one. Even a little support like liking the tag is quite much to help me get enthusiastic to continue the story.

the storyline is very interesting. i would suggest using adequate paragraphing. even though there are a lot of cultivation novels, this one is very interesting.Waiting for more.

Amazing premise for the book, with a increase in grammatically quality it could be a top book! 10/10. I love this book so much that I am going to read it every night now.